Pokeneon7

Hello! This is my first time posting on the OCR forums so bare with me if you noticed anything bad. At this point in my remixing career, I will not be even close from getting a piece accepted. I use Garageband '11 and Logic Pro 9 to make my remixes so you know and well.. here goes nothing. http://www.box.net/shared/mkdrz3akkp Leave any suggestions/complaints/complements or anything in the topic. I'm looking for any way to improve. Thanks.