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gaspode

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  1. Beautiful melody and instrumentation. From 0:43 on I think it would be nice to have some kind of lead-instrument. Because after the intro the whole song seems a little bit like a backing-track, especially when the choirs come in. Furthermore I think there should be pauses and variety in the piano-department to emphasize different parts of the melody. You have a really good foundation here, now you should build on this.

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