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ondellonoya

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  1. 20 hours ago, Souperion said:

    Gotta say, those arpeggiating strings grabbed me right off the bat. I like the smooth guitar as a lead, too. All the timbres work together, nothing really overpowers anything else... very nice. The extra ornamentation was appreciated, too. Nice builds, keeps the listener engaged all the way through. Frankly, I would download it as is, though the fade out outro felt a little disappointing for me, since it was at a fast part. Maybe slow it down for the end, or go a little longer. Good work, anyways!

    yes, I also noticed something is not right about the outro but never realized it until you mention i.. go a little longer sounds like a good choice

    and if you want to download it, here's the link:
    https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Byt4wkXJlPoJcUpQc05LaDlycUE
    thanks man, really appreciate it!

  2. On 8/8/2018 at 1:03 PM, mattmatrice said:

    Sounds cool! I really like the rock elements implemented - they really ad a nice touch to the overall piece. I would just work on humanizing the instruments; some parts sound a little too quantized. Keep it up!

    thanks man, I think I'll work more on humanizing the instruments on the next piece! really appreciate it!

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