Tommy.172

This sounds fantastic. Can't think of a single criticism. Sounds really natural and laid back, and there's alot of different things going on at once, but not too much that it distract from the vocals. Really good stuff

Here it is...(it repeats from 1:23, so you can stop it playing from there if you want to) http://soundcloud.com/1722tommy/little-light-bulb This was inspired by a game (to-be) called 'Chroma'. Here's a video of some gameplay Basically this song is my attempt at creating a piece that I think would fit the gamplay. Since I'm interested in composing for video games, I'd like to know how well people think the music and gameplay go together. Also, any general advice regarding the actual song will be of help, I'm sure. I spent alot of time mixing and mastering, and avoided having too much going on at once (which is why it may sound a bit empty in places), since I have been very sloppy with mixing, mastering and instrumentation before. This was made in Ableton Live 8, so any specific advice about making it sound more 'professional' would help, since I'm sure there must be something to make it sound even fuller. Thanks for any comments/listening

Thanks for the post The choir samples came from Abletons 'Partner Instruments Compilation', from their website. It's a free download as well. Thank you for taking the time to respond. It's good to hear what other people think. I'll definately start working on an introduction now

Hey This is my first attempt at a proper remix, so needless to say, I most likely need some good advice so that it sounds half-decent. This is not finished, as I've spent most of the time trying to mix and master it and find the right sound. http://soundcloud.com/1722tommy/spewer-remix-work-in-progress The first link is my remix, and the second is the original. My main concern is that my remix doesn't have a strong enough connection to the original, for it to be a proper remix. I've added new melodies and harmonies, but I have a feeling I'm not using the original melodies enough. Any comments about that would help me greatly. I'm gonna add an introduction that builds up to what I've got so far, but any comments about the structure I should go for will really help. BTW, this was made in Ableton Live 8 Thanks for any help