Slimy

Hello, I've recently made an account here so that I could get your opinions of my most remix. The remix can be heard here: https://soundcloud.com/slimy-4/kraids-lair-second-remix The original can be heard here: I would appreciate any critique that you could give me, so that I can make this song sound as good as possible, and know what to expect in the future. Thank you in advance for listening!