Thanks for the feedback everyone. It was a really difficult remix to make since I had to make the lyrics sound solo. Even though the instruments were playing in the background. I'd take you up on that offer. The only reason I put a chorus in was because the lyrics were simply too quiet. I can edit it for vocals and it would sound ALOT better after some changes.
It's basically nearly complete, I just need a way to increase the lyrics volume without making it's own backtrack overshadow mine, in which you can't hear the originals track at all. Thanks for listening!