I find the rapping in the remix is a bit like Limp Bizkits and I seen these Limp Bizkits haters dissing them proll cuzs they dont like dont like rap with rock.
Anyways the remix.
The Intro is too long man, I was waiting for 1 min just to the main rapping to come in! when is it going to end!?
Bass would be nice maybe...
Rapping is really more like Limp Bizkits than Eminem (Eminem really takes the piss remember) But the "one life" bit I like, it's sounds it just goes with the part.
Overall, this one is not as fat as Eres Des Points, but I rate you for getting closer to emu the pro's rapper go there.
Keep up the nice work!