Kyran

For some reason, the beginning and the guitar sound remind me of some of the music from FF8.

I, for one, feel like the voice works pretty well. True, it could use some work, but it adds a nice touch.

It could have longer. It seems like just as you're getting into the song, it's over, wanting more, but not enough to loop it. I agree a second guitar solo would improve it.

I think that he really put too much effort into developing the percussion. It could have used some more work with the melody.