I rather enjoyed the chanting in this piece. It really made the song feel ancient in nature and fit well with a cathedral environment. I loved the transitions. The song is an awsome one, and should not be touched.
I found this composition building more and more intense and wonderful as it progressed. The smooth transitions are key to this songs success. I do not share the "Cheesy music" factor with the previous guy, I actually find it epic as previously stated. Good work. Make more!