Orchestral Elements + Electronica + Industrial + Electric Guitar = This Song

[Cree`]

Hello,

Just made a new song, and got a friend to record the guitar section for it.

What do you guys think, any way can improve it more?

http://www.sendspace.com/file/nlf7gm

[Cree`]

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[PlastikBag]

This is definitely interesting. I like it.

Overall I think that the song sounds a bit thin. The strings sound a it muddy too. In fact, I think that better string samples would help the mix a ton.

[Jago]

The strings coming from the right channel (cellos?) could use a slight boost in the upper frequencies, just enough to give them more vibrance. The center strings, though, sound completely muffled, as if most of their high frequencies were taken out.

I didn't like that kick you used, for it sounded too loose for what I felt would fit in this song. I'd try a tighter kick. Very nice guitar playing, so I'd definitely keep that.

Keep us posted!