djpretzel Posted July 8, 2003 Share Posted July 8, 2003 go here: -there you find a song by me called trance of zelda. Brink of Time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malcos Posted July 9, 2003 Share Posted July 9, 2003 Hehehe I love that monosynth part. This is hard hitting, almost to the point of clipping (or maybe it is clipping?). The piano part put the level of the mix down somewhat - it definitely needed some more reverb, and could have done with a little delay too. YES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protricity Posted July 10, 2003 Share Posted July 10, 2003 This follows the original pretty closely. The drum kick is so lound that it floods otu the melody completely with each hit. No clipping malcos. I'd like to see a song with such generic beats to go somewhere with melody at least, but this mostly just repeats. On a song thats been done so many times, something more must be presented. Off key issues with the monophonic synth lead. No real ending. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beatdrop Posted July 10, 2003 Share Posted July 10, 2003 HOLY CLIPPING KICKDRUMS, BATMAN! Uh, yeah, this is really really really really badly EQed. The drums totally drown out everything and are just heinous. Add to that the fact that it does follow the original very closely (AND the fact that it repeats like nuts), and that's plenty enough for me to say NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vig Posted July 15, 2003 Share Posted July 15, 2003 terribly generic intro. there is lots of clipping. in the intro there seem to be some bad notes. the lead synth was cute in the intro...but now its getting annoying, it sounds like someone tried to operate a tape player with a power drill. okay, its getting quite repetitive. there is only drums and melody. this is not acceptable. at all. the drums never change, and they are the predominant instrument in the song. this song relies too much on drums and doesnt offer anything else. no Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djpretzel Posted July 23, 2003 Author Share Posted July 23, 2003 delay-breaker: No Though not awful to listen to, I agree with Prot & Vig's comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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