djpretzel Posted July 8, 2003 Posted July 8, 2003 Shadowgate_Symphony_OC_Remix.mp3, email sub, no other info provided -djp
Protricity Posted July 10, 2003 Posted July 10, 2003 The style is continuous. The drumfills are all the same. I would suggest more varried drum fills and perhaps a more intersting drum progression. This follows the original rather exactly. The bells have a bit of floody release. Notes never change, and finally, its only 2 minutes. Work on song length, change up the style perhaps, along with the beat and the melody. NO
Beatdrop Posted July 10, 2003 Posted July 10, 2003 Er, wow. This is really really really repetitive. The mixing's bad, the song's generally quite loud, and all of the sounds seem to have come from a very cheap sound module. NO
Israfel Posted July 16, 2003 Posted July 16, 2003 The arrangement here isn't really that bad- it manages to really highlight some of the strengths of the original and the voice leading that's used here is pretty effective. But I also agree with the comments of the judges: a bit too repetitive, there's really only one musical idea here that's looped about 3 or 4 times. the mixing needs work- the drums are perhaps too loud, and the whole mix sounds like either the mids or highs are up a little too much, resulting in a generally abrasive sound. I'd stick with it though- this sounds like you've got some real talent and just need some more practice. But for now, NO
Vig Posted July 17, 2003 Posted July 17, 2003 there is....so much clipping....its constant. NO Oh, and as for the mix itself, it's short, it repeats, and it maintains the same dynamic level throughout the whole mix.
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