djpretzel Posted October 5, 2003 Posted October 5, 2003 Ok...This is the third and the final part of THE TRAVELER... I know that I used a lot this title, but I wanted to create this trilogy based on Tales Of Phantasia from SNES.... Well the link is I hope that the tags are right... Thank you Freemind
Protricity Posted October 9, 2003 Posted October 9, 2003 Lemme guess. Reason? 1:30 has passed and the song hasn't started yet which makes this a 2 minute song 2:30 has passed and its still nothing more than the chord structure of the original. And now it ended.. This works as an intro to a longer song but not as a song in itself. NO
The wingless Posted October 12, 2003 Posted October 12, 2003 I'm not familiar with the original so-- First Impressions: Umm... your can hear total MICage in the text. Especially at the end of "oF" and your p's pop like a highschool assembly. It's a believable little monologue... but when you hear constonants [sic] pop, it shatters our suspension of disbelief, which is a shame, because the atmosphere it creates is gangstah And... it's OVARRR. Since I don't know the original, I'm going to have to defer to Protricity's wisdom and assume that no, the melody only pops up at the tail-tail end. Final Impression: Clean up the monologue (because some of it is inaudible), and get rid of the pops. Then focus on bringing out the melody early, and using the rest of the piece to really expand upon an original idea. NO
Disco Dan Posted October 13, 2003 Posted October 13, 2003 ok, I have a different idea. Less talk, more music. At about 1:30, it could easily turn into a kickass remix of the Knight Rider theme. Man I want to hear that now. OH MAN THIS IS LIKE, SO CLOSE to the Knight Rider theme. That percolated synth. But yeah. Cool synths and all, but it doesn't really go anywhere. Some chords, some random beats, and more reverse cymbals than even I use. Needs more substance. Maybe a middle and ending would be nice? NO D
Digital Coma Posted October 14, 2003 Posted October 14, 2003 First ten seconds has sounds and chords similar to many songs of this style, good way to start out. Yeah, this is turning out to be another excessively elongated intro of an arrangement. I guess that's some sort of accomplishment for three and a half minutes of sound. Like a looping soundscape beginning credits theme to a psycho-horror flick, there's not much music here. Also, I share Wingless' complaints on the voice clip; metallic flange is neat, but it's barely comprehensible. Take these sounds and make a mix. NO
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