Mysterious1ne Posted December 5, 2009 Share Posted December 5, 2009 here's something I put together just so a few people could hear me. I don't expect it to get good marks, but, for all people who are considering using me as a lyricist here's your taste... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nabeel Ansari Posted December 11, 2009 Share Posted December 11, 2009 The beat doesn't really match, and a lot of the orchestration is drowned out by the rapping. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysterious1ne Posted December 12, 2009 Author Share Posted December 12, 2009 The beat doesn't really match, and a lot of the orchestration is drowned out by the rapping. like I said... I don't expect this to get this big marks. but I do thank you for letting me know your issue with it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nabeel Ansari Posted December 12, 2009 Share Posted December 12, 2009 like I said... I don't expect this to get this big marks. but I do thank you for letting me know your issue with it... Try lowering the volume of the voice and create a beat that matches the tempo. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysterious1ne Posted December 12, 2009 Author Share Posted December 12, 2009 I will get on that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diseased Project Posted December 19, 2009 Share Posted December 19, 2009 Batman and rap. I'll be damned. Never thought of the idea of mixing THOSE two together... The background stuff is obviously the driving force in the audio clip, but nevertheless, based on what we have here, I have these comments: -Like people have said already, lowering the vocal volume would help. It also sounds like it hasn't been edited at all; try tinkering with dynamics etc. A better mic wouldn't hurt either...You don't want any breath noises in there. -The song ends abruptly and it sounds like some weird shit has been done to the background stuff. Like some sort of strange compression. I don't know. -English is not my native tongue so I can't catch all the lyrics, but I hear there's something about motherfucking, pimping and niggas getting high. Not very Batman-ish if you ask me. Why does it have to be gangsta rap? As is, it almost like blasphemy to me. -Often times, there's an added last word in the sentences, for example "Heart attacks" "Glass" "Dash" "Ass", and so on. It gets old. And sounds a little out of place. Whoops, I accidentally closed the browser window the file was on and I'm too lazy to open it again, but I think I was going say there's a little too much random Yo's and Yeah's in the intro; I'd rather put some actual words in there too. And finally I was going to suggest you'd try out some neat effect on the voice in the beginning, maybe something like an equalizer with fucked up ranges, or an effect that makes the voice sound like it's coming through a megaphone. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysterious1ne Posted December 22, 2009 Author Share Posted December 22, 2009 Batman and rap. I'll be damned. Never thought of the idea of mixing THOSE two together...The background stuff is obviously the driving force in the audio clip, but nevertheless, based on what we have here, I have these comments: -Like people have said already, lowering the vocal volume would help. It also sounds like it hasn't been edited at all; try tinkering with dynamics etc. A better mic wouldn't hurt either...You don't want any breath noises in there. -The song ends abruptly and it sounds like some weird shit has been done to the background stuff. Like some sort of strange compression. I don't know. -English is not my native tongue so I can't catch all the lyrics, but I hear there's something about motherfucking, pimping and niggas getting high. Not very Batman-ish if you ask me. Why does it have to be gangsta rap? As is, it almost like blasphemy to me. -Often times, there's an added last word in the sentences, for example "Heart attacks" "Glass" "Dash" "Ass", and so on. It gets old. And sounds a little out of place. Whoops, I accidentally closed the browser window the file was on and I'm too lazy to open it again, but I think I was going say there's a little too much random Yo's and Yeah's in the intro; I'd rather put some actual words in there too. And finally I was going to suggest you'd try out some neat effect on the voice in the beginning, maybe something like an equalizer with fucked up ranges, or an effect that makes the voice sound like it's coming through a megaphone. I like that. those are ideas worth merit... and so the re-tweaking begins Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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