'Clarencio' - Mix

[Mordi]

This tune is still in the mixing phase (haven't started mastering), but I'd like to know what more experienced musicians think of my mixing.

http://mordi.ziphoid.com/data/music/work_in_progress/Clarencio%20Mix.mp3

(The tune itself is maybe a bit dull, along with my arrangement)

I have mixed primarily on a 5.1 set, but I also have some headphones. I think maybe the bass is a bit shy when listening on the headphones, but I'm not sure if it's just that I am used to pretty loud sub-bass with the subwoofer. Also, the kick feels very "light" on the headphones maybe.

Those are my thoughts so far.

Edit: Here is a quick master. Has a bit more 'air' and some compression. Subtle changes from the mix.

http://mordi.ziphoid.com/data/music/work_in_progress/Mordi%20-%20Clarencio.mp3