An Infernal Engine

[Jarmatus]

So this is something I'm working on - opening, intro and first section only.

My issue is that everything I write tends to turn into an extended series of solos over an unchanging bassline, with possibly a few "choruses" thrown in. I want to make a change: what could I do with this piece to make it more interesting?

(This, by the way, is my first post.)

[Dash Myoku]

Only thing I can offer...is just try out new sections. If you feel like something could work, expand on it.

A lot of it is really trial and error. But really, what you have there isn't all that bad, even with the "repeatitive" bass.

...lol Sorry, this probably wasn't very helpful. xD