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hey, nice work! this is pretty chill... great driving music.

Here's what I noticed on a few listens:

-it needs some work to make it "feel" less repetitive - you need a few more sections to mess around with during the song.

4 more chords would do this song wonders.

-there's a loop at 2:35 or something that seems... off.

Maybe it's the kick doing that slight stutter that causes it.

-At the halftime section, you definitely need a longer snare sound or some heavy reverb.

-you should disguise your filler loops a bit better, imo. like at the end - just some brief changes on a FEW upbeats would make all the difference.

-overall, the balance is skewed too much to the highs, I think.

I would definitely reduce the volume of the bass to make it more felt than heard, and bring up the kick to compensate.

-I'm not sure it's the right kick for the job, either - something with more subs and less mid would make the track even more chillout. (if that's what you're going for)

good stuff here, can't wait to hear the finished thing!

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hey, nice work! this is pretty chill... great driving music.

Here's what I noticed on a few listens:

-it needs some work to make it "feel" less repetitive - you need a few more sections to mess around with during the song.

4 more chords would do this song wonders.

-there's a loop at 2:35 or something that seems... off.

Maybe it's the kick doing that slight stutter that causes it.

-At the halftime section, you definitely need a longer snare sound or some heavy reverb.

-you should disguise your filler loops a bit better, imo. like at the end - just some brief changes on a FEW upbeats would make all the difference.

-overall, the balance is skewed too much to the highs, I think.

I would definitely reduce the volume of the bass to make it more felt than heard, and bring up the kick to compensate.

-I'm not sure it's the right kick for the job, either - something with more subs and less mid would make the track even more chillout. (if that's what you're going for)

good stuff here, can't wait to hear the finished thing!

this sound's like advice for a more agressive track ;p

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-RK- could you please post a WAV to this, im likin it ;)

Oh absolutely. I'm going to be finishing this up soon, I'll post a link in this thread, send you a PM. Glad you like it!:)

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