Piano / Guitar Piece

[Troyificus]

This is something I made when I first got Mixcraft using samples that come with the program. I wouldn't consider it finished by any means and there's no mixing on it at all but any thoughts or feedback would be nice as I've kinda lost my thread with this piece

[Capt. Stupidity]

Pretty good, pretty good. I like how the song escalates at the beginning...but then it stays in mid escalation. You add another harmony but the bass notes remain the same. Change those up a bit. Try rolling the bass notes a bit rather than having it hit the whole chord.

Guitar is cool, but I would suggest tweaking the tone as it sounds kinda muddled. Also, when the guitar comes in and plays by itself the crescendo suddenly drops and then you escalate it a bit by bringing in some sort of lead, but I think it still needs some work.

It's very catchy and that's great. Build on that and you should have a solid track.

[SonicThHedgog]

what he said,but the guitar part's clip volume in the beggining of every take you do, edit the guitar track better an let all your tracks fade out with a reverb effect, not suddenly.

but this is great!

[Troyificus]

Thanks for the feedback guys! I'll see what I can with it