Capt. Stupidity Posted January 10, 2011 Share Posted January 10, 2011 I am trying my hand at a solo piano piece (synthesized, not live). The basic melody is pretty much done. I might lengthen it a bit. Flourishes will be added, but for the most part I want to keep it simple, nothin' fancy. Mostly, I am looking for feedback on how the song flows, humanization, and if the track is at all interesting (i.e. not repetitive). http://soundcloud.com/ezlo/slile-suzavka-wip-v-1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erineclipse Posted January 10, 2011 Share Posted January 10, 2011 Rather melancholic I'd say, a little bit on the repetitive side but in this case I think that works in your favor. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelsDen Posted January 10, 2011 Share Posted January 10, 2011 The Bridge from 1:32.. the transition to it doesnt sound to good. It disturbs the whole feeling that you grab at again later. Although this is an atmospherical- cold menchaolic piece with a decent arrangement i would like to recommend you to give it a tiny bit more depth... This piece would fit well into flashback Movie scenes or wastelands in Games. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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