erineclipse Posted January 11, 2011 Share Posted January 11, 2011 I wrote another song, it's supposed to be a racing song. Please critique it. I will give virtual smileys. http://www.mixpod.com/playlist/75229273 http://mp3upload.ca/music/download/35862 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Low Phi (HEDEFECT) Posted January 15, 2011 Share Posted January 15, 2011 Hmmm. . . Not bad, not bad at all. I kinda like it. Keep it up, dude! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erineclipse Posted January 15, 2011 Author Share Posted January 15, 2011 Hmmm. . . Not bad, not bad at all. I kinda like it. Keep it up, dude! Thanks, I took a break from it and listened to it again and it doesn't sound as bad as it did a few days ago, there are still a few things i'd like to tweak here and there, one or two drum phrases and a sequence here or there. I'd also like to reduce the length of the song by 10 seconds or so. Maybe it sounds better because I turned my speakers up, or partly because I was getting tired of hearing it over and over again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Low Phi (HEDEFECT) Posted January 17, 2011 Share Posted January 17, 2011 Thanks, I took a break from it and listened to it again and it doesn't sound as bad as it did a few days ago, there are still a few things i'd like to tweak here and there, one or two drum phrases and a sequence here or there. I'd also like to reduce the length of the song by 10 seconds or so. Maybe it sounds better because I turned my speakers up, or partly because I was getting tired of hearing it over and over again. I guess you could do a bit of tweaking, but yeah it's sounds well-mixed on its own. Very Daft Punk-ish I might add--which is weird for me because I just got this TRON OST from a record bar I couple of days ago before listening to your song. Keep it up dude! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erineclipse Posted January 17, 2011 Author Share Posted January 17, 2011 I don't know, I kind of wanted to get that Mario Kart 64 feel but instead the song comes off as a little too poppy and in your face. I'm thinking about just downloading an emulator and just seeing if I can disable the music and play the game and compose it that way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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