Chocoway Raceway

[erineclipse]

I wrote another song, it's supposed to be a racing song. Please critique it. I will give virtual smileys.

http://www.mixpod.com/playlist/75229273

http://mp3upload.ca/music/download/35862

[Low Phi (HEDEFECT)]

Hmmm. . .

Not bad, not bad at all.

I kinda like it.

Keep it up, dude!

[erineclipse]

Hmmm. . .

Not bad, not bad at all.

I kinda like it.

Keep it up, dude!

Thanks, I took a break from it and listened to it again and it doesn't sound as bad as it did a few days ago, there are still a few things i'd like to tweak here and there, one or two drum phrases and a sequence here or there. I'd also like to reduce the length of the song by 10 seconds or so. Maybe it sounds better because I turned my speakers up, or partly because I was getting tired of hearing it over and over again.

[Low Phi (HEDEFECT)]

Thanks, I took a break from it and listened to it again and it doesn't sound as bad as it did a few days ago, there are still a few things i'd like to tweak here and there, one or two drum phrases and a sequence here or there. I'd also like to reduce the length of the song by 10 seconds or so. Maybe it sounds better because I turned my speakers up, or partly because I was getting tired of hearing it over and over again.

I guess you could do a bit of tweaking, but yeah it's sounds well-mixed on its own. Very Daft Punk-ish I might add--which is weird for me because I just got this TRON OST from a record bar I couple of days ago before listening to your song.

Keep it up dude!

[erineclipse]

I don't know, I kind of wanted to get that Mario Kart 64 feel but instead the song comes off as a little too poppy and in your face. I'm thinking about just downloading an emulator and just seeing if I can disable the music and play the game and compose it that way.