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Or so. This is an ORIGINAL TRACK it just sounds plagiarized...which is pure coincidence...anyway I am wondering what I should do to make the sound more interesting, the melody sounds good and I like the instruments, but the sound is very quiet and there should be more going on. Need all the help I can get, I should probably learn this stuff before I continue forward...

http://www.fileden.com/files/2010/4/3/2815300//song1.wav

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Or so. This is an ORIGINAL TRACK it just sounds plagiarized...which is pure coincidence...anyway I am wondering what I should do to make the sound more interesting, the melody sounds good and I like the instruments, but the sound is very quiet and there should be more going on. Need all the help I can get, I should probably learn this stuff before I continue forward...

http://www.fileden.com/files/2010/4/3/2815300//song1.wav

Sounds as though you're in doubt of it's originality lol

Anyway, this needs

Moar powerful bass

Moar drums. You had like......none so far.

The melodies are nice though.

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