First Song I ever made

[mickomoo]

I never really got feedback specifically about this song. I know it's a bit over the topic but it's technically the first song I've ever written and finished:

http://tindeck.com/listen/wqkh

[Mak Eightman]

You know, this could be pretty nice thing, unless..

Lot of timing issues in arrangement, terrible fake guitar and I hate this cymbals. Trumpet sounds bad, not real(believe me, I was a trumpet player).

Maybe you tried to make some horror tune? If this true than I can understand some time issues, but "guitars".. You know this guitars too horrible for horror. Also you too aggressive when using ride's roll. It sounds bad.

Little advice: listen to any rock, metal or whatever this kind. You will hear lot of interesting in drums section. And forget about fake guitars. Find yourself in some other vsti or buy guitar(BETTER)!

I like organ and choir, btw.