electro house - production feedback/advice?

[halc]

i've been dabbling in it a bit I suppose and this is probably the best thing I've come up with so far.. unfortunately for me chthonic set the bar pretty high with his stupid(ly awesome) original album. ;D

http://halc9bit.com/private/to-day.mp3

all feedback appreciated!

edit: obligatory ABRUPT ENDING warning. you have been warned of an abrupt ending.

[Rockos]

PRetty neat. I think the bass lack of change. It just go around and get cutoff a little bit. Maybe adding another bass line and sound will make a difference. Like Feed Me or Zedd.

[Theophany]

Sounds awesome. I'd maybe layer another snare onto that clap at some point. And adding some modulaton and fx to the bass just for the intro would help pull me into the track more on the intro. Once the chips and melody hit I'm feeling it though. Looking forward to the updates...

[SonicThHedgog]

this is sweet, yah add some distorted synths and i think u'll create a monster by then.

[Jared Hudson]

I'm digging some of the synths. Very much like Deadmau5. The beat however needs thickened up quite a bit. That kick drum is not slamming like I want it to. It needs to be deeper, while holding a solid punch. Also run some compression on all the drums to really get them slamming hard.

Nice start.

[halc]

thanks for the feedback everyone! will post updates as they come.