One Must Fall 2097 - Power Plant

[Toilet Goat]

Hi all, just made a 'heavy trance' cover/remix of "Power Plant" titled song from OMF 2097

new version : http://soundcloud.com/toilet-goat/power-plant-omf-2097-heavy-1

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A2pDMui-3v8 < old version

all criticism is welcomed =)

also original song here:

[Jarski]

First 20sec I was like wtf is this, but it turned to a great track in the end!

I think its too messy at start, make it cleaner or try different samples.

I like the finrg feeling on it, but that orchestra hit doesnt seem to fit in, or so I think.

Make it longer and cleaner then it will be very nice.

[Toilet Goat]

http://soundcloud.com/toilet-goat/power-plant-omf-2097-heavy-1

here's new version... I think I made it even messier or somewhat. what u think? :b

[Jarski]

nah, I think its much better now, the breakbeat parts are nice and I notice that you have added some more game fx

ps. kyllä toi bileis toimis

[Toilet Goat]

need more opinions bout the song thnx

[Guifrog]

Untz untz untz untz \@/

Your arrangement ideas are freaking funky funtastic! This one's even better than your orchestral piece, as things were written more coherently here, but still there's things I'm concerned about on the production side.

To begin with, heavy overcompression there. Before applying a limiter, I'd suggest you to work the volume of each instrument you've got and see if overall levels sound balanced enough.

Beginning sounds odd somehow, and there's some muddiness in it. You could probably cut just a bit of reverb from your instruments, but I think it's happening due to the overcompression.

Not digging the vocal work. Sounds like bad mic recording or something. Some EQ work, probably?

Okay, I guess you should just work on the overcompression issue before I go further, just so everything sounds clearer to me ;D

[Toilet Goat]

thanks for the advice, I'll look in to the matters when I have the time for it