Obtuse Posted August 7, 2011 Share Posted August 7, 2011 I would appreciate some feedback on this ReMix. I will be submitting it for this weeks PRC. I would like to make it awesome enough for OCR Submittal. Source - Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BorgMan Posted August 8, 2011 Share Posted August 8, 2011 THe "whiiiiiiiuuuuuuuu" thingys in the beginning are a bit much, but I'm actually digging this! Not a lot of deviation until halfway though. If I were you, I'd work on making it a bit fuller because right now it seems it's a bit on repeat after the first half. Try to stick to begin - middle - plot - end, of which you're missing the plot right now. You're "missing" something overall anyway, I just can't put my finger on it what that is... Has great potential, though a judge might be better to tell you what goes wrong where Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjMystix Posted August 8, 2011 Share Posted August 8, 2011 seconded on the "whiiuuuuu" repetition (remove it from every other measure at least) but man , it's lovely. my main issue is that the overall sound needs more punch (mainly drums and bass). Plus the lead is very very weak. Not only needs to be replaced but also apply a bit of reverb to it. And yes, the source is way too small to NOT improvise. Great stuff, looking forward to a more polished version. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BorgMan Posted August 15, 2011 Share Posted August 15, 2011 OK, this got pushed off WAY too fast! Other people need to hear this too! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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