Nintendude794 Posted September 17, 2011 Share Posted September 17, 2011 Source track: Remix: Also includes homages to a couple other themes, one from Metroid and one not Let me know if ya figure it out Made a Double-Rainbow Version: Lyrics: Double-rainbow, all the way across the sky in Phendrana Drifts Double-rainbow, all the way across the sky it's freezing outside. *repeat* *improvisational vowel-shape bus'ness* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozovian Posted September 21, 2011 Share Posted September 21, 2011 Your mixing and sound design needs work. For example, your first sound's echoes work well, but the sound itself is stiff and raw. The other tracks have similar problems. The track doesn't really "click" until the bass comes in, the drums and intro bells don't seem to belong to the same track - one being clear and up-close and the other reverb-y and distant. It's an effect that _can_ work, but both tracks would need some work on their sound design to sound better on their own before they can contrast each other well. So basically, sound design and mixing needs the most work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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