Final Fantasy 7: Jenova Absolute Electro Dub

[King Kayle]

My first real attempt at anything of the genre, i realise a lot of people aren't fans of it either but any constructive criticism is welcomed

http://soundcloud.com/king-kayle/jenova-absolute-electro-dub-1

EDIT:

Is a more recent version, with minor alterations, i don't usually like putting youtube links up but it is newer

[Rockos]

Nice start.

The only thing is that the sounds are unbalanced. 0:49 nearly killed me. That wobble is very nicely added but TOO LOUD. I raised the volume cause the song is quiet and then this came and killed me. Same at 0:53. The lead that start at 0:56 is very repetitive. Check out and play a little bit with that. I dig the bass at 1:20 but it's too loud again. From 1:30 to the end is very repetitive too. And the last part near the end that dubstep, there is too much reverb and the snare. Reduce the lower reverb and boost a little bit the higher input on it. And the bass there is still overpowered.

Otherwise it's awesome for a first. Keep it up.

[King Kayle]

Thanks very much for the feedback Yeah i can see that wobble bass is a problem, i probably shoulda put a warning on it but i'll defo turn that down :') All the other suggestions are duly noted and i'll keep working on it