King Kayle Posted November 15, 2011 Share Posted November 15, 2011 My first real attempt at anything of the genre, i realise a lot of people aren't fans of it either but any constructive criticism is welcomed http://soundcloud.com/king-kayle/jenova-absolute-electro-dub-1 EDIT: Is a more recent version, with minor alterations, i don't usually like putting youtube links up but it is newer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rockos Posted November 15, 2011 Share Posted November 15, 2011 Nice start. The only thing is that the sounds are unbalanced. 0:49 nearly killed me. That wobble is very nicely added but TOO LOUD. I raised the volume cause the song is quiet and then this came and killed me. Same at 0:53. The lead that start at 0:56 is very repetitive. Check out and play a little bit with that. I dig the bass at 1:20 but it's too loud again. From 1:30 to the end is very repetitive too. And the last part near the end that dubstep, there is too much reverb and the snare. Reduce the lower reverb and boost a little bit the higher input on it. And the bass there is still overpowered. Otherwise it's awesome for a first. Keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Kayle Posted November 16, 2011 Author Share Posted November 16, 2011 Thanks very much for the feedback Yeah i can see that wobble bass is a problem, i probably shoulda put a warning on it but i'll defo turn that down :') All the other suggestions are duly noted and i'll keep working on it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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