The Force Of 4 Ounces

[AngelCityOutlaw]

Here's a little electronic-rock track I've been working on. Currently it's missing a guitar melody and the finished recording will have actual bass guitar. I will also be sending this one in for professional mixing and mastering, so commenting on the mix will probably be pointless. Therefore I am only looking for feedback on the composition/arrangement itself.

Thanks

http://soundcloud.com/angelcityoutlaw/the-force-of-4-ounces-demo-1

[AngelCityOutlaw]

Demo 2

http://soundcloud.com/angelcityoutlaw/force-of-4-ounces-demo-2