Underground Zone & Dragon Road (Sonic the Hedgehog)

[wildfire]

This was my first entry in the Sonic Zone Remix Competition ( http://ocremix.org/forums/showthread.php?t=39652 ). I'm thinking about finishing this track up and submitting it.

http://tindeck.com/listen/nfjr

Thoughts?

[Rozovian]

Dat bass drum.

Transition a third into the track is the first thing that really bothers, it's sudden and leads to a part with some weird harmonies. The bass in the break seems to play in a different mode than the melody. Some weird harmonies and changes in scale/mode after the break, some that work, some that don't. Leads are pretty soft, but they're also quite bright, so while you should probably raise their level some, you should be really careful with how you do that.

Starts well, ends well. The bass drum is unsensibly loud, yet you've managed to write around it quite well. You could drop it a few dB and still have it loud, tho.

Arrangement/source crits if you take it to mod rev. I'm lazy.