Would love to get some feedback on this. It's kind of finished.

[Mawnz]

Weeeeell here it is! The bass might be a little weak?

http://soundcloud.com/mansaberg/twisted-stuff

[Mawnz]

Ugh I'll just post another version of the song

http://soundcloud.com/mansaberg/en-fin-sko

[Nostalvania]

Yeah, nice work. How about adding a B section or interlude, or something like that? The melodies are nice, but i think it gets a little bit repetitive after a while.