Nostalvania Posted December 12, 2012 Share Posted December 12, 2012 This original composition is supposed to be an ending credits theme that plays at the end of an old 16-bit game. http://tindeck.com/listen/ckew Feedback is appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelsDen Posted December 12, 2012 Share Posted December 12, 2012 So sweet and Romantic... i love it!!!! And it somehow reminds me of the Lufia 2 Ending theme (to the future) As for the Feedback: - It needs at least a short Intro to build up the mood - The Overall Arrangement sounds repetetive, but there would be a huge Impact if you just change some Instruments (Mainly the Lead Instrument and leave out the Highbells) at the half of your Song. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PROTO·DOME Posted December 13, 2012 Share Posted December 13, 2012 Yeah, this is straight up fucking good. Your chords are amazing. Everyone, listen to this guy's chord sequence. That ending. That middle 8. Your instrumentation is weaksauce as are the rhythms. More variation! Add drums! Add a bass! Seriously, do it. EDIT - The bass'd be all: Buuh dah... bi dah di dum, buuh dah... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nostalvania Posted December 13, 2012 Author Share Posted December 13, 2012 Thanks for the feedback guys! I'm glad you liked it. Your chords are amazing. Everyone, listen to this guy's chord sequence. That ending. That middle 8. Thanks! Yeah, I love chords! I'm really pleased that you appreciate the middle section. It's my favourite part of the entire piece. Your instrumentation is weaksauce as are the rhythms. More variation! The Overall Arrangement sounds repetetive, but there would be a huge Impact if you just change some Instruments (Mainly the Lead Instrument and leave out the Highbells) at the half of your Song. I think you are right, some variation on the instrumentation couldn't hurt. Drums? hmm... why not. - It needs at least a short Intro to build up the mood Yes, an intro would be nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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