Remix of Team Rocket Theme

[SkyStørmKuja]

So, I am interested in submitting a track to the OCRemix database, but considering the quality of submissions I decided that it might be a good idea to first get some feedback on the track I'm considering.

Any constructive criticism is welcome.

[Kanohi]

Sounds like a good basis so far, but I think this one has a bit to go before you submit it. The things I would pick out initially are that since it's Techno, the kick should have a lot more power to it (in my opinion at least). Sounds like a very dance-y sort of tune, so seek out some kick drum samples with a better bass, the one you're using right now has a good medium section but the low-end is almost nonexistent. I would generally suggest different drum samples, perhaps from some free packs on LoopMasters and the like.

The synths all sound pretty good, maybe some cleaning up and EQing and if it were me, a few automation clips throughout the song to vary how the leads sound and give a sense of progression.

Aside from that, it sounds pretty good so far, I like the arrangement and it has a lot of potential

[SkyStørmKuja]

Thanks for the comment. I'll will work in improving it. Still quite new to the technical side of music, but I'm learning.