My First VG Song Attempt

[PhaDaPhunk]

Today I created my first Video Game theme. I'm a programmer and I love VG music so I thought i'd try making music for my own game.

I'd Love to get any feed back from you guys it would mean a lot.

Thanks in advance

[Esperado]

the drums need some variation and theres a part around 140ish that has the sounds of birds chirping and water running. while it doesnt sound bad at all as part of the mix, it doesnt sound very wintery, if thats the idea you have going. thats a bit of a small nitpick, but I enjoyed it though! i always enjoy hearing more laid back atmospheric songs.

[PhaDaPhunk]

thanks a lot ! I got the comment about the water and birds from someone else too so I guess it's really something I have to change. Has for the drums I guess I will have to find new patterns although I don't want the drums to take to much place in the song so I'm trying to make them as subtle as possible.

[Esperado]

there's a thread over in the music production thread about varying them. I think the levels sound fine, but you could just change the rhythms slightly on certain ones. the patterns sounded good, just on autopilot the whole way through.