super mario world 3 (world 8)

[musicsnob22]

hey there I made ​​a remix

some find it good or bad but let us know something

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/532151

[timaeus222]

The sounds are very generic/plain, without much textural development throughout. The writing is pretty simple, and the main lead is very grating to my ears, probably around 8000Hz. Abrupt ending so far, if it was a WIP.

I personally would consider this far from done, but it's a start. Don't get discouraged though, keep trying.

[Skrypnyk]

hey there I made ​​a remix

some find it good or bad but let us know something

This worries me.

The piece screams novice. There's no groove, the beat is unbelievably boring, there's no effects used, there's literally nothing here. It sounds like you 'found' a copy of FL and are trying to figure out how to use it.

Keep trying, keep learning, keep practicing.

hey there I made ​​a remix

some find it good or bad but let us know something

This scares me.