SNES Tetris Attack Water Theme Critical

[Forreasonsknown]

It would be nice to get some feedback from you guys. I've redone this song like 10 times and I think I finally got it how I want but feels like its still missing something. Any help would be appreciated

and I just uploaded to youtube with a random video attahed to it so just ignore it lol

[Kanohi]

This game had a phenomenal soundtrack, cool to see it getting some love!

For one thing, I think the whole mix is rather quiet. I have to turn my speaker volume to max before I could clearly hear everything. I love the patient, ambient feel to the whole track. Nothing seems rushed and it flows very nicely! I think this could do with being a bit longer and having some variation, or even a different instrument or two come in at one point, but as-is it's very good

[Melodious Punk]

this reminds me a little bit of the Ico couch music.

in general, I feel like the quieter parts of the instruments is being lost, turn the volume up on the mix and there may be some tonal detail that's currently lost.