blahzae Posted May 24, 2013 Posted May 24, 2013 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4jA3yQLXhKo Comments Welcome! Quote
Feyhd Posted May 25, 2013 Posted May 25, 2013 I like it! Short but solid. Personally, I wish the guitar-ish synth decayed a bit more smoothly, but it's not a big detractor. Quote
SonicThHedgog Posted May 25, 2013 Posted May 25, 2013 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4jA3yQLXhKoComments Welcome! Yesssss this is sweet! the lead could use a bit of a high end boost (or excitement). Naw this track is dope, love it! Quote
Cash Posted May 28, 2013 Posted May 28, 2013 First, I just want to say I very much enjoyed what you have here. Nice chilled out and relaxing atmosphere. I did notice some areas where you could improve. I noticed something strange about the kick. From 0:00 to 0:27, I hear a good punch/boom on the kick. Then from 0:27 to 0:50 the kick seems to lose that punch. The punch then comes back from 0:50 to 1:09. The kick loses that low end punch once more at 1:09 until the end of the song. I think I may actually be mistaking the bass for a punchy kick, in the 0:00-0:27, and 0:50-1:09 sections. I'm not sure though. I hope I'm being clear enough. Aside from that, I'm not liking the guitar synth lead. It sounds too dry, maybe add some effects such as reverb/delay, chorus, phasing, etc. Right now it sounds bland and doesn't stand out enough. Also, the ending is currently abrupt, it just sort of ends. There is no winding down, or decrease in energy. Keep up the good work! Quote
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