djsatsui123 Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 A bit of a house flavor to neo green hill. It's nothing TOO flashy but I think it came out pretty well. Enjoy! youtube - soundcloud - https://soundcloud.com/djsatsui123/sonic-advance-neo-green-hill Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrett Williamson Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 Ah, Neo Green Hill from Sonic Advance. Although I like Act 1 better, you did a nice remix here. Love the synths in this one. Very 70s-ish. Also like the percussion. I feel it starts to repeat itself though after a while. I'd add in some variation. Keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timaeus222 Posted June 4, 2013 Share Posted June 4, 2013 (edited) It sounds a little muddy in the low end. Try high passing your EP-like instrument up to where the bass instrument's frequencies stop. The bass instrument is also really loud. 0:15 - The portamento saw has a weird LFO depth. Try decreasing the depth a little bit, and increasing the cutoff a little bit. Sometimes the cutoff gets too low. 0:35 - I suggest the kick be layered with something that has more high end to it. It's gotta feel like it's sorta glued to the limiter. The snare needs a little more treble. 0:39 and 0:47 - cymbals feel awkward. Why are they there? 1:04's lead is pretty flimsy, especially after that drum fill to what I would expect to be great. Honestly sounds like a simple sine wave with no vibrato. Everything after 1:34 is a repeat. Add something new. Lead sequencing needs more attention to detail. Came out alright, but it's not quite OCR material at the moment. Edited June 9, 2013 by timaeus222 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SonicThHedgog Posted June 9, 2013 Share Posted June 9, 2013 summery! I like it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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