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Sonic Advance - Neo Green Hill Zone Act 2 remix


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It sounds a little muddy in the low end. Try high passing your EP-like instrument up to where the bass instrument's frequencies stop. The bass instrument is also really loud.

0:15 - The portamento saw has a weird LFO depth. Try decreasing the depth a little bit, and increasing the cutoff a little bit. Sometimes the cutoff gets too low. 0:35 - I suggest the kick be layered with something that has more high end to it. It's gotta feel like it's sorta glued to the limiter. The snare needs a little more treble.

0:39 and 0:47 - cymbals feel awkward. Why are they there?

1:04's lead is pretty flimsy, especially after that drum fill to what I would expect to be great. Honestly sounds like a simple sine wave with no vibrato. Everything after 1:34 is a repeat. Add something new. Lead sequencing needs more attention to detail.

Came out alright, but it's not quite OCR material at the moment.

Edited by timaeus222
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