Neifion Posted July 12, 2013 Posted July 12, 2013 (edited) SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/kekopro/life-is-bazaar Edited December 11, 2013 by Neifion Quote
timaeus222 Posted July 12, 2013 Posted July 12, 2013 I think some of the brass articulations could be tighter: 0:11, 0:15, 0:26. 2:00 strings are pretty mechanical and just too slow. 2:07 is a little off-tempo (late). 2:15 and on feels like the same dynamics the whole time, but it's supposed to lead into the ending, so the volume shouldn't stay static like that. It made the ending unexpected. Sounds like you have the right sounds, but it needs some more touch ups on the articulations, dynamics, and reverb. Quote
Neifion Posted July 12, 2013 Author Posted July 12, 2013 I think some of the brass articulations could be tighter: 0:11, 0:15, 0:26.2:00 strings are pretty mechanical and just too slow. 2:07 is a little off-tempo (late). 2:15 and on feels like the same dynamics the whole time, but it's supposed to lead into the ending, so the volume shouldn't stay static like that. It made the ending unexpected. Sounds like you have the right sounds, but it needs some more touch ups on the articulations, dynamics, and reverb. Cool, thanks for the feedback! Quote
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