Opening Song (?)

[PostmanCHILE]

Hello again. Today i want to share with you this song that I composed and i want to if this song is a good option for an opening.

This isn't finished, maybe the idea, but I need to record everything with real instruments, 'cause I used Reason 5 for this.

https://soundcloud.com/marco_mella/uno

[20abox]

First of all, I like the melody of this track and there is the potential to do something great with it.

Reminds me Akira Yamaoka's work a tad.

However, at first sight, I think the guitar sounds a bit rough. Have you tried with an acoustic guitar or different effects ?

But this is only my point of view. I can take it back and put it in my butt

To answer your question: yes, I think that can easily do the job as an opening theme once finished.

[PostmanCHILE]

However, at first sight, I think the guitar sounds a bit rough. Have you tried with an acoustic guitar or different effects ?

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Thanks for your comment.

I know that the guitar and also cymbals sound like shit, thats because i made the song on Reason 5 with virtual instruments, but i want to record it again with a real guitar, drums, keyboard, etc. etc.