Castlevania: SOTN Dracula's Castle - Electronica Action Mix

[Kamasenin]

[AngelCityOutlaw]

This is pretty cool.

However, I do feel that the transitions are rather weak. At 0:22, everything literally just stops and then the new part begins. I don't think that bell melody even returned back to the tonic - it just gets right to the strings. Same kind of thing at 1:57, where that sweet ambiance outro happens. Again, the melody doesn't cadence as it should and the final drum hit isn't nearly as powerful as it should be. I would have added a crash cymbal or something there as well.

The strings around 1:00 are staccato, but as I recall they were not so in the original source. Other than that, I'd say the drums over-power most of the instruments.

[Chlysm]

For the lead, I would recommend something more powerful. The drums sound really good and as said before, I think you could work on the transitions a little bit.

[Chlysm]

Just a suggestion in regards to the lead. I think something like this would be more appropriate as a lead for what you arranged.

It's not perfect, I just recorded this impromptu to give you an idea of what I'm talking about

http://www.mediafire.com/?42g545d62hfewcd

[Kamasenin]

Thanks for the feedback so far. Keep 'em coming.

[Kamasenin]

Thanks for all the feedback so far.