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My personal opinion is that the piano has too much delay in it in the beginning. I'd cut the feedback a little lower. Also, from the sounds of it, the velocity sounds like it's the same for every note, making it sound mechanical. Humanize that so it has a more realistic feel. If your guitar is the same, do it with that as well.

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The piano into is rather bland and repetitive. I think that if you made it start slowly, then increased the tempo until it was up to speed, it would feel like it was building up to something, instead of just repeating itself over and over again. Taking out a few repetitions wouldn't hurt either.

I like the percussion that comes in at 0:37. I like the bass at 0:37 too, but as the melody it feels kinda buried to me.

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