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PSO2 - Our Fighting (Rock)


Grayburg
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Remix: https://soundcloud.com/grayburg/our5

It's been a long time, but I'm finally going to finish a song, and would like some feedback.

Is the tampering of the verse's melody too noticeable? It sounds so much better with the backup singers hitting off beat, but the gaps created by doing so had to be filled somehow..

How's the mixing? Atm, the volume of the vocals need to be fixed in a few places. The snare might be fattened up as well.

I'd also like to know what part of the writing seems too.. corny? to be acceptable.

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