Jorito Posted November 22, 2014 Share Posted November 22, 2014 (edited) So, I made this drum 'n bass-ish version of the first stage from Undeadline, a vertical shmup for the MSX2, X86000 and Sega Megadrive. Overall I'm feeling pretty good about it, and in general it has the vibe I was going for. However, I'm not totally happy with the flow yet, some parts feel out of place and I'm a bit stuck. So some help would be nice The stuff that bothers me the most is 0:33-0:44, which is part of the original but feels weird, transition-wise. I think it maybe needs to go. Also 3:10-3:32 feels a bit misplaced or too long or the rhythm guitar part is just badly sequenced, I dunno... Anyway, have a gander: Source: Remix: http://www.jorito.net/files/Undeadline/undeadnb_20141109.mp3 BTW, I'm aware the mix can use some work; this is just my raw DAW project with not a lot of mixing and EQ going on (I usually do that in a separate session with exported wavs) Edited November 23, 2014 by Jorito Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Michael_Lochlann Posted December 7, 2014 Share Posted December 7, 2014 it sounds pretty good to me. i was listening for the guitar part in particular to see if i could contribute, but it sounds fine how it is. it doesn't sound realistic, but that fits in this track. i think a realistic guitar would actually be out of place. pretty cool and keeps your interest the whole time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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