YoshiBlade Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 So it begins, there is my own personal saga taking place and if your really interested check out http://ocremix.org/forums/showthread.php?t=48894 for the details Soooo in the post I basically just said I was going to be hitting the workshop hard and well here it is the first of a ,not too, long of a list of tracks that I've been mixing for the event. It's bouncy, its simple and its pokemon...what more does one need? What I need is feedback in the form of 1) would you groove to it? 2) is there anything that is going to get rotten fruit throw at me? (screeching sounds, clashing tones, wrong notes?) 3) what can be improved?...that is all really. The count down begins and I look forward to spending much time polishing my craft here for the next month or so. Remix- https://soundcloud.com/yoshiblade1/poke-center Original- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timaeus222 Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 It's alright. One gripe is the bass note never changes from the point it comes in. It's just the same note repeated no matter what the chords are, and that makes it plodding for me. Also, from 0:48 - 3:08, the drums are practically on autopilot, and the melody feels copy-pasted. It feels like nearing the end of a pop song and hearing the chorus repeated a few times, but twice as long. Overall, it's just too repetitive, even as a dance song; the production is OK, but it doesn't draw me in to the extent that I would dance to it. Try this as a pacing reference. http://ocremix.org/remix/OCR02018 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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