HoboKa Posted April 11, 2015 Share Posted April 11, 2015 https://soundcloud.com/hoboka/leavingchristmas-mass-effect-3 This didn't even make it to the J panel on grounds that it was lacking in direction. Can I get a better explanation of how the direction didn't work? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoboKa Posted April 11, 2015 Author Share Posted April 11, 2015 NVM Palpable answered that question in a PM...I'll keep the link here for people to listen to anyway. I really need to get a damn MIDI keyboard... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timaeus222 Posted April 11, 2015 Share Posted April 11, 2015 X.X Dat robo-piano. The repeated high note at 0:12 is definitely the main culprit in the beginning. There are just too many rigid chords lying around throughout the whole track. Also, those Damage impacts at 0:40 or so are quite loud. I wouldn't have expected them. I think making them more distant would help make the soundscape more cohesive. Something as simple as a low pass near 10000 Hz could do it. 1:15 just felt like the timing was off. Did you mean to slow the tempo down? I didn't expect that. Also, 2:13 - 2:23 on the piano just felt like you were trying out a direction, and kept whatever you tried. To me it sounded confused. So, basically this: - The piano notes feel rambly - The Damage drums stick out a little too much IMO I think you should at least be able to mark up some clear sections in your remix, if it is to have a regular structure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoboKa Posted April 11, 2015 Author Share Posted April 11, 2015 X.XDat robo-piano. The repeated high note at 0:12 is definitely the main culprit in the beginning. There are just too many rigid chords lying around throughout the whole track. Also, those Damage impacts at 0:40 or so are quite loud. I wouldn't have expected them. I think making them more distant would help make the soundscape more cohesive. Something as simple as a low pass near 10000 Hz could do it. 1:15 just felt like the timing was off. Did you mean to slow the tempo down? I didn't expect that. Also, 2:13 - 2:23 on the piano just felt like you were trying out a direction, and kept whatever you tried. To me it sounded confused. So, basically this: - The piano notes feel rambly - The Damage drums stick out a little too much IMO I think you should at least be able to mark up some clear sections in your remix, if it is to have a regular structure. ok, thanks for the feedback. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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