TheReverend Posted May 4, 2015 Share Posted May 4, 2015 Hey all, it's been a while since I've been here. I have a piano waltz remix of the Village and Town themes from the SNES version of SimCity and was hoping for some constructive criticism and evaluation of this track. I've only done a little effect work, and while it's not dry, it's not polished either - but that will be fixed. Mostly looking for critiques of the arrangement and content. Thanks for listening! Valse de SimCity: https://soundcloud.com/ryan-joseph-miller/valse-de-simcitywip Sources: Village - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HPcP8MRh8r4 Town - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dzL5W8regZY&list=PL49FD69EAB07C9C7A&index=4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patrickclaytonworking Posted May 5, 2015 Share Posted May 5, 2015 Completely subjective, but I think the tone, specifically the brashness and aggressiveness, of left hand staccato piano part in the first 10 seconds is off-putting. Then again, it creates a nice contrast when you use a bit more legato in the left hand in the middle and end of the track. Overall, it's very pretty and as a minimal piano interpretation of the tracks I think everything pulls together nicely. TheReverend 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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