WIP - SimCity (SNES) - Valse de SimCity

[TheReverend]

Hey all, it's been a while since I've been here.  I have a piano waltz remix of the Village and Town themes from the SNES version of SimCity and was hoping for some constructive criticism and evaluation of this track.  I've only done a little effect work, and while it's not dry, it's not polished either - but that will be fixed.  Mostly looking for critiques of the arrangement and content.

 

Thanks for listening!

 

Valse de SimCity:

https://soundcloud.com/ryan-joseph-miller/valse-de-simcitywip

 

Sources:

 

Village - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HPcP8MRh8r4

 

Town - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dzL5W8regZY&list=PL49FD69EAB07C9C7A&index=4

[patrickclaytonworking]

Completely subjective, but I think the tone, specifically the brashness and aggressiveness, of left hand staccato piano part in the first 10 seconds is off-putting. Then again, it creates a nice contrast when you use a bit more legato in the left hand in the middle and end of the track. Overall, it's very pretty and as a minimal piano interpretation of the tracks I think everything pulls together nicely.