patrickclaytonworking

Thank you for the constructive criticism and kind words! I've always liked the arrangement and interpretation of the song, but I knew it needed work and this is a great bit of feedback to point me in the right direction.

Completely subjective, but I think the tone, specifically the brashness and aggressiveness, of left hand staccato piano part in the first 10 seconds is off-putting. Then again, it creates a nice contrast when you use a bit more legato in the left hand in the middle and end of the track. Overall, it's very pretty and as a minimal piano interpretation of the tracks I think everything pulls together nicely.

Hey all, this is my first post on the OC forums! A few years back I produced a remix of the Sherman Park theme in the NES game River City Ransom. I am coming into some free time this summer and was looking to take it out of the closet and do some more work on the track. https://soundcloud.com/patrick-clayton-working/sherman-park-incomplete Source: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mAIcDkgCsWw Any help would be appreciated. Thanks!