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I like it, though a complaint hear and there. Overall guitar was fine. But it got kinda' off timing wise at certain spots. Solo was also fine, but my biggest complaint was the lack of variety. Other than towards the end, the harmony for both lead guitars is always an octave. Sure it is nice at first, but after the first 10 seconds or so, I started losing interest. Adding some parallel sixths or thirds could've spiced things up a bit. Even adding solo chord tones in the upper register would've helped. Other than that drums and bass were fine. I would have added some more complexity to the bass though (that is mostly a personal objection). Just cause it is in the lower register doesn't mean it doesn't deserve some love. Could've even carried the melody at some point to add variety.

It was a fun little listen, and I hope you I hear more of you in the future :).

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I like it, though a complaint hear and there. Overall guitar was fine. But it got kinda' off timing wise at certain spots. Solo was also fine, but my biggest complaint was the lack of variety. Other than towards the end, the harmony for both lead guitars is always an octave. Sure it is nice at first, but after the first 10 seconds or so, I started losing interest. Adding some parallel sixths or thirds could've spiced things up a bit. Even adding solo chord tones in the upper register would've helped. Other than that drums and bass were fine. I would have added some more complexity to the bass though (that is mostly a personal objection). Just cause it is in the lower register doesn't mean it doesn't deserve some love. Could've even carried the melody at some point to add variety.

It was a fun little listen, and I hope you I hear more of you in the future :).

Hey thanks, feeback is always really nice. I agree, timing was off at some points, but that won't happend next time (I was too lazy to rerecord the parts with off timing).

-I don't know if I Agree about the variety, but I agree about the Harmonies, I should have used parallel sixths or thirds for the Harmony stuff.

-I wanted the bass line to stay simple, and I guess I did LOL. 

But to sum things up, I'm on a journey of learning how to become a better guitarist and musician, so this feedback is very VERY valuable to me. And you will definitely hear more of me, already working on my next cover, which will contain cool sounding Harmonies and a more complex bass line for sure. 

Thanks for you comment man. I really appreciate it! Have a nice day 

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