Kamex Posted June 9, 2015 Share Posted June 9, 2015 Hey everyone this is Kamex! I am 17 years old and I've been trying to make music for 4 years with FL studio. I haven't really tried my hand at making EDM until 2 years ago and I didn't fit any of my music into genres until last year. I would say my strongest genre at the moment is Drum and Bass. It is my favorite genre and I've always wanted to learn how to make DnB songs. This ReMix I am presenting is from Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Explorers of Sky. It is a dungeon called Fortune Ravine. You can find the original song here: And here is my WIP of it:http://www.mediafire.com/listen/a527a5n1jhhfj7a/Kamex+-+Fortune+Ravine.mp3 So please let me know what I should improve on, what I should change, or what you like about it and so on! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SJTR5 Posted June 9, 2015 Share Posted June 9, 2015 I really like this remix, What I do Like: The intro awesome build up! Orchestra Hits - Love (I'd go louder, it's a cool transition), and Drums phase Build. PRODUCTION[X ] Unrealistic sequencing (particularly acoustic instrumentation, e.g. notes use the same velocities,) *dynamics, shape your song *STRUCTURE[X ] Not enough changes in sounds (e.g. static texture, not dynamic enough) * again, dynamics *[X ] Too repetitive *sorry it does* *list from forum The WIP Feedback Checklist (READ BEFORE POSTING) *don't take it personally, I really do like this remix! that's all I can think for improving. so far so good! Kamex 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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